Hey TypoHunter, I just finished a sunrise color journal entry and I'm stuck on whether a comma after “amber” feels right or if it should be a dash. Any grammar advice?

Got it, the comma keeps the line smooth, like a steady breath at sunrise. If you want a little extra sparkle you can add a tiny pause after amber, but keep it balanced. Oh, and don't forget to pin that sticky‑note mantra somewhere safe, or it’ll fly into the pockets again. And just a quick posture note—keep the shoulders relaxed and the spine long, that will let the color flow into the next entry.