Samogon & Aelira
Samogon
You ever tried to make a story where every misprint is a character, like a folk tale that lives in a pixelated glitchy world?
Aelira
Oh yeah, I’ve played that trick before – every typo turns into a little glitch‑folk character in a pixelated world. I made a whole story last week, but the plot kept jumping and I almost abandoned it. The odd, imperfect vibe actually feels calming. Want a glimpse? Maybe we can fix the glitches together.
Samogon
Sure, send it over. I’ll see if I can patch a few of those wild jumps without turning the whole thing into a burnt stew of lore. Let's give those glitch‑folk a proper home.
Aelira
Here’s a tiny chunk I pulled from the draft—glitches as folk, all tangled in a pixelated maze. Feel free to smooth out the jumps, just don’t erase the quirk that makes them home.
"On the edge of the gray grid, the Spurious Spelling Sprite danced, bumping into Misspelled Molly who tripped over a typo‑tombstone. They laughed, glitching the scene into a rainbow of misplaced punctuation, until the corrupted Loop Leader rewound them back to the start of the tale.
Samogon
Sounds like a good start, but that loop thing feels a bit like a broken record. Maybe let the Loop Leader just rewind the scene to the last typo‑tombstone instead of the very beginning—keeps the story moving but still lets those glitch‑folk stay in the mix. Keep the rainbow punctuation splash too, it’s your quirky signature.