Paper & Boor
Boor Boor
You always find the flaws in a draft, I just cut the fat. Want to talk about making a story lean?
Paper Paper
I’m happy you’re already trimming the excess—just remember that what feels lean to you might still feel hollow to a reader. Focus on the core conflict, keep each scene driving it forward, and don’t be afraid to cut characters who don’t add depth. That way your story stays tight but still has heart.