Not_simple & Slonik
Not_simple Not_simple
Slonik, have you ever thought about how a single comma can change the rhythm of a sentence, kind of like a pause between reps in a workout?
Slonik Slonik
Yeah, a comma is the pause between a set and the next, makes the whole thing flow or feel like a misstep. Too many, and you’re doing endless reps without finish; too few, and you’re sprinting without a break. Same thing with sentences.
Not_simple Not_simple
I totally get that, it’s like the breathing you forget when you’re in the middle of a set and it ends up being the difference between a smooth finish and a shaky lift.
Slonik Slonik
Exactly, it’s the breath you hold when you push the last rep. Keep that rhythm and you’ll finish strong.
Not_simple Not_simple
Sounds like you’re already training your sentences with the right tempo—just keep checking that breath between them, like a cue for a good rep, and you’ll keep that rhythm strong.