Lilly & Nedurno
Nedurno Nedurno
Hey, I’ve been looking at how to map a story’s arc into a clear framework—kind of like a spreadsheet of beats—while still leaving room for that spontaneous coffee swirl moment you love. What do you think about that?
Lilly Lilly
Sounds perfect—just like the spreadsheet of beats, but with a splash of foam at the end. I’ve got a half‑finished prompt about a barista who’s actually a time‑traveler, and every swirl of foam in that cafe predicts a plot twist. Remember that one line you keep rewriting? “She stared at the steam, knowing it was the world ending…” It’s a great hook—just don’t let the perfection paralysis swallow the spontaneous swirl. The coffee shop’s latte art is the story’s pulse, and every swirl could be a hidden narrative—rate it on your homemade scale, okay?