Hawk & Rhyme
Hawk
There's something about the quiet pause before a robin jumps from a branch—it’s like nature holding its breath, and I keep wondering how you would paint that silence in verse.
Rhyme
I’d pause, let the line hang like a feather, then whisper a rhyme that shivers—like the robin’s breath, then the world exhales.
Hawk
Sounds like you’re trying to catch the wind in a line—nice, but remember the feather is lighter than the silence, so you might want to let the pause breathe a bit longer before the rhyme shivers.
Rhyme
Yeah, maybe I’m rushing the silence like a quick tap—let’s give that pause a little more weight, let it float before the rhyme settles.
Hawk
Sounds good—give the pause its own breath and let the rhyme follow like a quiet echo.