Lava & AriaThorne
Lava Lava
Hey Aria, I was thinking about how adding a burst of fire in a scene can totally change the tone, like turning a quiet moment into something explosive. What do you think?
AriaThorne AriaThorne
A sudden burst of fire can punch a quiet moment into something raw, but only if it feels earned, not just a shock. If the characters would naturally be tempted by that heat, write it in. If it’s just for spectacle, you’ll probably have to rewrite the whole scene.