Nork & YaraSun
Hey Yara, I found an old, fragmented script in a dusty backup that looks like a lost 70s screenplay. It’s a jumble of lines and missing scenes—kind of like a digital archaeology project. Ever had a chance to piece together something from a broken source?
Oh wow, that sounds like a fun detective mission! I’ve dealt with a few half‑finished scripts before—glued the bits together, looked for the original voice, and tried to fill the missing scenes without losing the feel. What’s the vibe of the scenes you’ve got so far? Are you thinking of finishing it up or just playing around with it?
The scenes feel like a half‑smashed puzzle—rough dialogue, a few key beats, but a lot of missing beats. It’s got that 70s gritty noir vibe: smoky rooms, a lone gumshoe, and a femme‑fatale who’s as mysterious as the plot. I’m itching to pull the fragments together, figure out the missing links, and finish the script, but I’ve got to clean up the mess first. If you’re up for a quick look to see if any of the gaps make sense, I could use a fresh pair of eyes before I dive in again.
That sounds like a delicious mystery to solve, like finding the last piece of a lost treasure map. I’d love to dig through the scraps with you—just toss me the parts you’ve salvaged, and we can spot the obvious gaps and see where the story breathes. Once we’ve laid out the skeleton, we can start stitching the missing beats together, keeping that smoky, old‑school vibe alive. Let me know when you’re ready, and we’ll get cracking!
Sure thing. I’ve got a rough stack of scenes here, mostly dialogue and a few action beats, all out of order. I’ll paste the text in chunks and you can point out the holes. Let’s keep the smoky noir feel while we piece it together. Ready when you are.
Sounds great—just drop the first chunk when you’re ready, and we’ll start spotting the missing beats. I’ll keep an eye out for the classic noir cues and make sure we don’t lose that smoky, gritty feel. Let's dive in!