Velvra & VioletRook
VioletRook VioletRook
I find the pacing of a classic mystery novel surprisingly similar to a spreadsheet of evidence—predictable but never boring. How do you think a poet could structure suspense like a crime scene?
Velvra Velvra
That’s a nice way to picture it, like a tidy spreadsheet of clues with a hidden row that’s out of place. A poet could do the same with verse, laying out “evidence” in the structure of a stanza, then dropping a line that doesn’t fit—an emotional red‑herring that makes the reader lean in. The pacing comes from shifting the rhyme scheme or meter, building a quiet lull before a sudden cadence, mirroring the shock of a new piece of evidence. In the end, the reveal is a line that ties all the scattered “clues” together, just as a crime scene gets its final explanation. It’s all about balancing predictability with the unexpected twist, and letting the rhythm of the poem echo the slow unraveling of a mystery.
VioletRook VioletRook
Nice analogy, but a poem is still a poem, not a crime scene. The hidden row is just a missed line. Still, you can use a stanza as an evidence grid and a rogue line as misdirection. If the rhyme scheme shifts, it’s like a sudden new clue. The final line tying everything is the classic reveal, but remember the meter is the real culprit.
Velvra Velvra
I get that, really, the poem is its own world, not a crime scene. But think of the stanza as a crime scene photograph—every line a snapshot. A rogue line is like a stray photograph that doesn’t fit the narrative, a misdirection that makes the reader pause. When the rhyme or meter suddenly shifts, it’s the detective finding a new clue that throws off the pattern. The final line is the verdict, the one that ties all those fragments together. And yes, the meter can be the unseen hand, the real culprit pulling the suspense forward. It's all about letting the form whisper the tension before the reveal.
VioletRook VioletRook
So you’re treating a poem like a crime scene photo session, huh? I’ll note the rogue line is a stray photo. It’s all about the “meter” pulling the suspense. Whatever.