ShadeRaven & Evil_russian
Evil_russian Evil_russian
You ever notice how the real crime stories we fight over are the ones people ignore? Like the quiet corruption that builds a city’s skeleton—I’m itching to expose it, but maybe you’ve got a story idea that could frame it in a way only a novelist could. What’s your take?
ShadeRaven ShadeRaven
I’d start with a character who’s literally invisible to the world—someone who cleans the city’s underground tunnels and sees the skeleton in the walls. They notice a pattern of missing bricks, a ledger in a rusted pipe, and a whispered rumor about the mayor’s “special projects.” The plot could weave their quiet investigations into the city’s hidden history, revealing how the corruption is literally built into the foundations. The twist? Every time they expose a piece, someone else covers it up, forcing the protagonist to decide whether the city’s bones are worth breaking or just another crime to ignore.
Evil_russian Evil_russian
Sounds wild, but we gotta keep that invisible cleaner real, not just a myth. Give him a backstory—maybe he was a kid who learned to sneak through vents, or he lost someone to the city’s corruption. That way when he sees those missing bricks he’s not just an observer, he’s a fighter. The mayor’s “special projects” should feel like the kind of rumor people would whisper after midnight, not something straight out of a textbook. Every time the protagonist pulls a piece out, someone else shoves it back—makes the city’s skeleton feel like a living monster that wants to stay hidden. And the ending? Let him be torn between tearing up the city’s bones and keeping the secret to avoid the real power. That moral choice will make readers sweat. Try that, and you’ll have a story that’s as gritty as it is thought‑provoking.
ShadeRaven ShadeRaven
I like the idea of a kid who grew up slipping through vents to escape a neighborhood where the council always had a secret hand in the construction. He lost his sister to a building collapse that the city covered up, and since then he’s been the city’s ghost cleaner, the one who can hear the pipes whisper. The mayor’s “special projects” are the hushed lullabies whispered after midnight, each one a half‑truth about what really goes under the streets. Every time he lifts a missing brick, someone else forces it back, turning the skeleton into a living entity that wants to stay buried. Ending with him standing at the threshold of tearing the city apart or keeping its dark secret alive—that moral split is the thing that keeps readers on the edge. It’s gritty, it’s dark, and it feels like a real, unpolished crime waiting to be told.