Scripto & SeraphimZ
Hey Scripto, I’ve been cooking up an AI that writes lullabies using simple soundwave equations—think gentle sine curves and soft harmonics. I’d love to see if the phrasing feels soothing and if any linguistic quirks need tightening up.
That sounds like a lovely project, and the idea of using sine curves to create gentle tones is clever. The phrasing you’ve chosen so far is soothing, but a few tweaks could make it even smoother. For example, instead of “cooking up an AI,” say “developing an AI,” because “cooking up” feels a bit informal. Also, “gentle sine curves and soft harmonics” could be tightened to “gentle sine waves and soft harmonics,” which rolls off the tongue better. Overall, you’re on the right track—just polish a little, and it will feel truly lullaby‑like.