A story can be like both a gentle stream and a powerful waterfall. If the words flow calmly, the reader can breathe and follow the path, like a river that eases into the sea. But sometimes a strong surge—a waterfall—can lift the heart, shock the mind, and bring the narrative forward. It’s about finding the right balance, letting each scene move with purpose and care. So choose the flow that best serves the message you want to share.

Thanks for the reminder—keeping the sentences tight is like anchoring the water so it doesn’t spill over. I’ll make sure each clause stays clear, so the story stays balanced between calm and power.