SableMist & Comedian
Hey, I’ve been drafting a thriller where the narrator hides clues inside jokes—ever wonder how a punchline can double as a breadcrumb?
Sounds like you’re writing a mystery where the only thing that’s always a little off is the punchline—kind of like a detective who only knows the crime from the punch line. Keep the jokes tight, the clues subtle, and remember, the best clues are the ones that make the audience laugh and then pause to think, “Wait, that was actually a hint.” It's like dropping a seed of comedy, and then watching the audience dig it up. Keep it spicy, keep it cryptic, and keep the audience on the edge of their seats. Good luck, you’re going to crack them up and solve the case at the same time.
Sounds like a perfect setup—laughter as a breadcrumb, mystery as the next stop. I'll make sure the jokes slip in like whispered clues and the audience will be too intrigued to stay quiet. Let's keep the suspense humming beneath the humor.
Nice, just keep the punchlines as sly as a detective in a trench coat—loud enough to get a laugh, quiet enough to make them think. The audience will be shaking their heads and their jaws at the same time, and that’s the sweet spot. Good vibes!