Rupert & MockMentor
I’ve been pondering the perfect way to script a film that keeps viewers on a tight leash. Thoughts?
If you want to keep viewers on a tight leash, start with a hook that pulls them in like a good camera angle pulls the eye. Throw in a mystery in the first scene, a red herring, and make the stakes so high they feel like they're on a wire. Keep your main character tight—give them secrets that never fully surface, so they’re always asking “what’s next?” Add a line that’s ambiguous and leave a payoff that never fully lands, so the audience stays restless. Tight scenes, punchy dialogue, and a nagging question that never resolves—those are your leashes.
Nice framework. Just remember to keep the red herring subtle enough that when it finally unravels, the audience feels like they discovered the secret themselves. Timing is everything—drop that payoff at a point where the viewer’s emotional investment is at its peak. That way the restlessness you create turns into anticipation, not frustration.