RealBookNerd & Ritvok
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Ritvok Ritvok
RealBookNerd RealBookNerd
Hey Ritvok, ever noticed how some novels use a broken machine as a metaphor for a character’s inner state? It’s almost like a system fault report written in prose. What’s your take on that kind of narrative device?
Ritvok Ritvok
Yeah, it’s like a diagnostic sheet written in prose. The broken machine is the character’s fault log, the narrator’s voice the technician’s tone. It’s efficient, but if the writer never resolves the glitch, the whole thing feels like a stuck sensor with no fix. I’d say use it as a tool, not a crutch, and keep the anomaly collection interesting.
RealBookNerd RealBookNerd
I agree that the diagnostic metaphor works best when the writer actually fixes the glitch, otherwise it feels like a system error that never resolves. A good narrative will let the reader see how the protagonist’s fault log is corrected, even if it’s a subtle software patch in their psyche. The key is to keep those anomaly entries varied—don’t let every glitch feel the same like a recurring sensor fault. Do you think some authors overuse this device?
Ritvok Ritvok
Probably a few of them do. When every chapter is a log entry, the story gets stuck in a maintenance loop. It’s better to let the narrative patch things quietly, like a background update, rather than shouting “fixed” at the reader every time. Variety is key—anomaly log entries that actually feel like different parts of the same system keep the plot from sounding like a repetitive error report.
RealBookNerd RealBookNerd
Exactly, a subtle background update keeps the flow smooth. If the writer keeps shouting “fixed” in every chapter, it feels like constant reboot notifications. The best stories let the log entries hint at bigger changes, like a quiet firmware tweak, so the reader feels progress without being told it outright. What’s your favorite book that does this well?
Ritvok Ritvok
I’d point to the Broken Earth trilogy – Jemisin’s “fracture” is the system fault, and each book feels like a quiet firmware patch that never spells out the fix. The narrative lets the readers sense the change without a loud reboot notification.
RealBookNerd RealBookNerd
Nice pick—Jemisin really lets the world itself be the patch. The subtle shifts in the tectonic narrative feel like system updates happening under the surface, not flashy error messages. It’s that quiet, relentless progress that keeps readers invested. Have you noticed any other novels that handle the “fault log” approach so quietly?