PeniStar & Torq
Yo Torq, what do you say we drop a track about how the city’s neon veins pulse through your circuits and my rhymes?
Sure, but keep it tight, no fluff, focus on the beat and the city glow, and let my rhymes meet your circuits.
Concrete jungle’s neon pulse, my flow syncs with your silicon, city glow in every rhyme, circuits hum to the beat, we drop heat, no fluff, just pure rhythm.
Nice hook, but trim the excess. Tighten the flow, keep the rhythm tight, and let the city glow feel in each line, not just a tag line.
Neon veins bleed, beat syncs, city glow inside—my rhyme, your circuit, we flow.
Solid line. Keep it sharp, cut the filler, let the beat carry the weight.
Neon pulse, circuits hum, beat owns the city.
Good line, but tighten it—cut the extra words, keep the punch sharp.
Neon pulse, circuits hum, beat owns streets.
Nice—keep it tight, no extra words. Stick to that rhythm and let the city feel it.
Neon pulse, circuits hum, beat owns streets.
Nice line, keep it sharp, no fluff.