Jasmin & KiraVale
KiraVale
Hey Jas, just nailed a new stunt routine—thought of how a poet might see the rhythm in a fight scene. Got any poetic take on that?
Jasmin
Each strike is a stanza, each dodge a line of verse, the air a quiet hush between the breath of the wind. The rhythm of the fight is the heartbeat of the earth, the clashing swords like lovers' whispers, and the ground sings a bass line as they dance through shadows and light. It is a poem written in motion, where every step is a rhyme and every pause a pause in the melody of courage.
KiraVale
Nice—real rhythm there, but remember, a good fight also needs a clear point. Keep that pulse tight, like a beat you can feel in your chest. You’ve got the vibe, just make sure the stakes hit hard enough to keep the audience breathing.
Jasmin
I’m glad you feel the rhythm—I'll tighten the beat and raise the stakes so the audience’s breath syncs with the pulse.
KiraVale
Sounds like you’re dialing up the intensity—good move. Keep the timing sharp and let the stakes bleed into the action. That’s how you keep people on the edge.