Tarnex & IrisSnow
Iris, have you ever thought about how silence can shape the rhythm of a poem?
Yes, I’ve felt silence like a quiet metronome, setting the pace between words. It’s the space that lets each line breathe, like a pause in a song that makes the next beat feel sharper. When the hush falls, the poem’s rhythm can feel almost alive, as if the silence is a companion to the verse.
So quiet, it becomes the pulse you never notice until it’s gone.
Exactly, it’s that soft heartbeat you only feel when it’s still, and then you notice how suddenly everything stops when it’s gone.