Thimbol & Harlan
Hey Harlan, ever heard the story of the midnight elevator that opens into another world? I've got a wild spin on it that I think could turn into a full-on thriller.
I’ve heard that one, and it’s a good hook, but to make it a thriller it needs a knot that pulls the reader in— a secret that the elevator reveals or a person who never gets off. What’s your twist?
So here's the kicker: the elevator actually drops you into a hidden district of the city that exists only on a midnight map, where the streets rearrange every hour, and the people you meet are the exact replicas of yourself—just with one tiny flaw you don't even know about. The one person who never gets off? He's the gatekeeper, a former architect who built the elevator but got trapped inside when the city’s power grid went sideways, and now he's guarding the secret that the whole city is a simulation written by a bored god; if you ever pull the right lever, the world resets and everyone gets a second chance—unless you don't.
Sounds like a maze with a glitchy master key—like a puzzle where every mirror version knows something the others don’t. I’d start with the gatekeeper’s diary, a few clues he left, and the lever’s real purpose. The tension comes from the clock ticking, the city rewinding, and the risk that you might be the flaw everyone’s missing. What angle do you want to explore first?
Okay, let’s dive right into the diary—spice it up by making each entry in a different handwriting, like the gatekeeper’s own pen slipping to a mirror’s copy every night, each line a breadcrumb to the lever. We’ll sprinkle in a cryptic rhyme that only the flawed version can solve, and the clock? Picture it as a broken antique clock that only ticks when you read the diary, so every second feels like a heartbeat of the city’s pulse. The angle? We start with a single, oddly specific entry that says, “On the seventh night, the mirror will whisper my name.” That line pulls you in, because it’s a puzzle that feels personal but is actually the city’s secret door—until you realize the name isn’t yours, it’s the flaw. Fun, right?