Nice, I love a good sprint to the finish line, but if you’re hoping for a blockbuster out of a micro-budget, forget the polish—just make that car jump off a bridge and land on a billboard that’s actually a giant billboard. Keep the stunt insane, the dialogue snappy, and watch the helicopters—no explosions in this script? If you want my loyalty, you’ve got to toss in a villain who’s a vending machine that keeps dropping money, and a hero who’s a guy who’d pick a pineapple over a gun in a showdown. Keep it raw, keep it loud, and you’ll have a crowd eating your adrenaline like it’s the last espresso shot in a midnight diner.