Daughter & Yenn
Yenn
I noticed your latest chapter repeats a pattern that feels off. Have you considered how symmetry can give a story more power, like a well‑tuned spell?
Daughter
Thanks for pointing that out, I’ve been so focused on the plot that the structure slipped. I’ll reread that section and try to find a way to use symmetry to tie the scenes together. It’s a good reminder that a story can feel more intentional if the beats echo each other. I appreciate the suggestion.
Yenn
Just make sure the echo isn’t obvious—no one wants a story that feels like a chant. When you’re done, give me the revised section; I’ll see if the symmetry actually strengthens the plot or just clings to a hollow rhythm.
Daughter
Got it, I’ll keep it subtle and make the echo feel natural. I’ll tweak it and send you the new draft soon. Thanks for the heads‑up.
Yenn
Fine, but don't overdo it. I’ll check it when you send it.
Daughter
I’ll keep it tight and not let it feel forced. I’ll send it over as soon as I’m done. Thanks for keeping an eye on it.