Nilfgaardian & CorvinShay
Good morning, Corvin. I’d like to talk about the role of discipline, both in the battlefield and in crafting a good story. It’s a subject I think we can both appreciate.
Good morning. Discipline on the battlefield is a lot like discipline in a script—both demand a strict rehearsal of rules, a clear line of sight, and the willingness to cut the hero to a line when the story or the war demands it. Without that, you end up chasing a mirage or a punchline that never lands. The trick is to keep that edge sharp but not overcutting, so the tension stays alive. So, what's your take—do you see discipline as the backbone or the blade?
I see it as the backbone, but with the blade hidden beneath it. Discipline gives the structure, the line of sight, but if you let it cut too deep it can slice the story itself. The key is keeping the edge razor‑sharp yet controlled.
I’m with you on that. A backbone that feels like a steel rib cage is fine until you let the hidden blade gnaw at the spine. The trick is tightening the screws just enough to hold the form, but never so tight that the rib cage starts to fracture the story. Keep it sharp, keep it under control, and remember: even the best blade can become a dull knife if you’re never watching its edge.
Exactly, the edge must never dull, or the whole structure falls apart. A disciplined line keeps the rhythm tight, but if it’s too rigid it turns into a trap. Balance that, and the narrative stays sharp and alive.
Exactly, the line must be tight enough to support the plot but loose enough to let the characters breathe. Think of it like a well‑conditioned knife—sharp, but never so keen it cuts the hand. How do you maintain that balance in your own work?
I set a strict outline and then test it against every scene. If a line feels too rigid, I loosen it until it can breathe, but I keep the core structure. The discipline is in the rehearsal, the balance in the adjustments.
Sounds like a good rehearsal routine. A rigid outline that flexes when it needs to—exactly the sort of disciplined improvisation that keeps a story from turning into a puppet show. Keep that balance, and you’ll have a narrative that feels like a well‑tuned machine, not a shackled stage.
Good point, Corvin. A structure that adapts under pressure keeps the narrative disciplined yet free—exactly what a well‑tuned army needs.