Dream & Caleb
Hey Caleb, I've been picturing a moonlit alley as a canvas—soft light, deep shadows, a hint of rain. Think that kind of dreamy vibe could fit in a crime story? What’s your take on blending the poetic with the gritty?
A moonlit alley is a classic. The rain, the wet cobblestones, the flicker of neon all give you tangible detail, and the darkness can mask what’s really going on. Poetry is fine if it enhances the mood, but don’t let it eclipse the facts. A crime story needs a concrete skeleton; the poetic touches just need to be grounded in realistic sensory details. It’s a balance—you paint the scene, then let the grit reveal itself beneath.
That sounds like a lovely way to see it—like painting a watercolor over a charcoal sketch. I love how the rain can turn the cobblestones into a silver mirror, but still keep the grit that shows the story's heart. Balancing poetic color with hard edges feels like breathing in the night and then exhaling the truth.