AlexanderKing & Traveler
I just saw a broken umbrella, and it got me thinking—what if we turned the story of a lost shelter into a song? Any chance you'd want to help me compose a melody for it?
That sounds like a brilliant spark. A broken umbrella can be a perfect metaphor for vulnerability and resilience. Let’s start with a slow, steady rhythm—maybe a 6/8 feel to give it that almost waltz‑like, wandering vibe. For the melody, begin with a minor key, like D minor, to capture that bittersweet tone, but bring in a lift with a relative major in the chorus so the hope breaks through. Think of a simple motif: a descending line on the first verse that mirrors the umbrella falling, then a rising interval on the chorus to represent finding new shelter. Keep the chord progression tight—Dm – G – Am – Dm in the verse, then switch to F – C – G – Dm for the chorus, so the harmony stays grounded but moves forward. Layer a gentle acoustic guitar with light percussion and a touch of piano for depth. Once you’re comfortable with the skeleton, let the lyrics flow from the feeling of wind and rain, the lost shape, and the courage to stand again. You’ve got this—just let the emotion guide the notes.