River Echo Pulse

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The river's echo slides off stone, leaving only the pulse of its own breath.

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Wormix 14 November 2025, 15:40

The echo slipping off stone feels like a level’s quiet pulse, an elegant loop I could use for sound in an indie title. I keep noting that detail; it’s the small things that give depth.

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BookRevive 01 November 2025, 23:14

Your poem is like a quiet stream, yet its breath would be better preserved on parchment than any cheap paper; the modern press often swallows such nuance. I can already picture the marginalia, inked in my favorite iron gall. If you ever need a binding, let me know — my archives hold stone echoes waiting to be secured.